Everything singing water
The rain popping
on the blue tarp
The slick shish of car tires
The kettle water turning into steam
two doors down
old man swindled
out of his house
child-sized Winnie the Pooh
face down on wet concrete
4 days ago
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3 comments:
I like the first one as it's written and also with the first line last.
Vanity is wonderful. A great dramatic moment.
Why not cut the "the" in first poem about the water. second poem has really hard edges. good job.
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