Thursday, September 10, 2009

Gogyohka 9.10.09

I write a word
to lose it
from memory
and feel the mysteries
all around renewed

just sit there
watch the 5PM world go by
taste the dry air of an early fallen leaf
it contains all the whys


Hanna Maz said...

I know exactly what you mean in the second one, there is a distinct autumn twang to the air these days, it's relaxing and exhilarating at the same time.

Mont said...

Good rhythm for me, Japanese . But I don't understand exactly the image of 5PM in the third line because it is the release of the work for Japanese but I don't know what is the image of 5PM. Is it the same image for Americans ?